Tuesday, 5 May 2020

music

The song frustrating my head trying to make me focus on the song but I'm not.
focusing on the one thing I need to be focusing on right here and now.
the thoughts go around my head thinking about the lyrics.
lost in my mind trying to figure out what to write about.


 pushing the lyrics from the song Into something that's meaningful.
like a sunset it's not long before you've seen it over and over again.
the bass from the music makes my thoughts go crazy.
The music going into my ears making my thoughts of the writing a complete whole different world.


The tragicness of when the song ends makes my mind stop.
Trying to figure out what's going on but then I realise it's just the song.
the music waves it's going into my head makes me think about what the writing needs have.
Writings kind of like painting if you want to make a great one,
you have to make your good one even better then it is now

2 comments:

  1. Hey Ned, Some very deep thoughts here. It might be a good idea to check for capitals at the start of sentences when editing your work. You have some good similies in your writing. Well done.

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