Friday, 12 June 2020

passion project


curry

Making her curry with your brain. The underlying pain she puts you in is a master peace by itself, The spoon she has is a torture device, She whacks you with her spoon until you don’t live no more.


She has people in her attic ready to put in her curry, She has spear people under her hat and she has a spear ladle ready for use. She ate so much curry she couldn’t eat any more. So she fed it to her pet rhino in her garden shed. Every now and then she bifs the unexpected victim in the shed to please her pet rhino so she is happy.


As she walks down the street, She grabs people and gently places them in her handbag. As she struts down her driveway she grabs some frogs for her delicacy.

Thursday, 11 June 2020


Friday, 5 June 2020

McDonald's needs work.

The Mcdonalds have bad hygiene.It seems like they haven’t cleaned their floors , They feel weird when you walk on them.

Don’t get me started about the toilets. They are the worst. The presentation of their food does not look like the ads. It is very frustrating when they get your order wrong, especially when you are in the drive thru and you don’t want to go in. They can’t even get it to look good.


That's just out right lazy. Why is the ground always sticky and gross when you are walking on them, it seems like they don’t even try to make the fast food place clean. The thing I’m trying to say is that Mcdanalds service sucks. I’m going to rate it a 4/10.

Thursday, 4 June 2020

Kia ora Police.


My name is Ned and im 12, I love cars, My favorite car is a alfa romeo,
but am just trying to set thing straight with these cars in otaki.


These cars that drive around Otaki are modded,
they seam to be all straight piped so they sound like a rampage, the thing is that i know where they live to.



Just why can they buy the parts to get them modded,
I think New Zealand should ban mods to come into our country.
Its just annoying,
they probably get them off the black market but it seems that the border dose not care,
that they are coming threw.


The thing is they do it every day and night and it seams like they don't even care about others,
so can you get some police at midnight to catch the and get the cars taken away.
Get the cars of the road so when people are walking they feal safe because they speed past you,
you get a shock because the noise hirt’s your head and you get a bad headache.


Don’t get me started about the burnouts, The tires is like a chalk bored ats just annoying when you hear it,
you are trying to get to sleep then suddenly the noise hits your ears and  you go crazy,
cause you're trying to get to sleep!


Why do they do because the risk is crazy and you mite hurt or kill your self or others so just stop doing it.
They threaten there life to be cool, thats just outwrite stupidity if you ask me. 


the problem is the cars. So im just trying to say can you get there cars of the road to save lives.


From Ned

For the sake of Otaki. 


Friday, 22 May 2020

Jacinda ardern writing

Kia ora Jacinda ardern


My name is ned i’m 12 and i go to Otaki College,
I live in otaki and it would be great if you could come to Oaki College after covid-19 wave.
I think if you come and visit Otaki, you will have a blast, We have great things that get us threw this


Thank you for saving so many lives in New Zealand. You probably have had no sleep.
Thank you for doing your part in this.


I want to recognise the things that you have done.
The good thing with you is that you are tough and stern to keep New Zealand safe during this time.
You are a great leader for this country and you have inspired all of New Zealand.


I think New Zealand is like our rugby team because we are going to win this war.
You are a great worker and leader for New Zealand. You put your time and effort to fight this battle,
The time Iam writing this for you there are 1,442 cases in New Zealand, With 21 deaths,
That’s a great total compared to the USA, or Italy, The thing im trying to say is,
You are the reason we are winning this fight in New Zealand. The struggle is not over but, It is close to it.
We just need to hang im there and we will win for sure,

Thank You Jacinda ardern.